Monday, April 02, 2012

3

 I remember when
the shootings stars refused
to grant our childless wishes
So we glued rainbows onto the sky instead
from my terrace
when the wind blew you away
from sight
from my mind
And my voice remained subdued
in all its cacophony
So I turned to the stars again
Wishing for you to return
And yet you remain light years away
leaving me all alone
on my terrace
a willful victim of
the wrath of love.

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My first attempt at poetry.  ^_^

Also, the title is inspired by the movie 3. And it was some movie. Moved me to tears. Loved it. It's sad that I could only catch the Telugu version. Hoping to watch it in Tamil soon. :)

6 comments:

  1. i smell i am missing something about this poem cuz i havent seen tht movie. u did gud. stay at it.

    btw why is the blog address miss cigarette? :P

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  2. Meghana,

    First visit. Got your link from your nice comment on blogspace I visit regularly. Read all current posts. Very sane advice in Don't Hate When...... . Nice photographs, are those captured on your cell phone? Mother is representative of God in the world. Nice poem, specially considering this is your first attempt. Keep writing.

    Take care

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  3. havent watched it,,.. but i guess the poem has something to do with the movie :)

    nice work

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